Finally the day came. I saw the shiny coat of black as I unwrapped it. It was just sitting in front of me. That was the first time I saw my net book. We were told not to touch it but I couldn't help it. I tapped the net book.
" Now you can open it" said Mrs Burt. My heart was beating fast and I was just excited to finally use it for the first time. When I opened it I saw lots of features like: A tiny camera, a mini mouse and the little keys. It was the cutest net book I had ever seen. The best thing about it was that it was black.
I would just like to say thank you to Mr and Mrs Burt for getting us these precious net books. I am sure that everyone is thankful.
Anyway that was what I thought when I first saw and used my net book. Thanks.
Hi Selena,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely post about the netbooks. I really liked your piece of writing because you explained the expressions on your face at the time you got it. I really enjoyed reading your post!! I hope you post more over the term.
Your Sincerely,
Mubasshira
Hey Selena,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your post. There was just one mistake that you left out. But that is ok! I really liked you expressive post about you unwrapping the Net Book for the very first time. Even I was like that. Once again great post about you and your net book!
Yours Truly
Hi Selena,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great post you did, I thought it was an interesting post cause you used your expressions well and you had lots of detail. I liked opening my net book and I thought it was the best part. Once again I really enjoyed reading your post. I can't wait until your next post!!!
From Sylvia
It was a moment to be treasured Selena. I love the way you have shared your feelings about this experience. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteHave fun discovering what else you can do with this great new device.
Mrs Nua